[own Narrative story] THE LIL GIRL AND THE CAT

*I'm trying to write a narrative story in school. Grammar and tense are still bad*

          Once upon a time, there lived a Lee family. Mr.Lee has a little cute girl, named Lee Hyun Rin. Rin was very loved her father. Although her mother was died, she really cheerful person.

          One day, when her father fell asleep, he forgot to lock the door. Rin slept next her father. She was a sleepwalker. Usually she just walked around her room and kitchen while she slept. But that night, she walked out and went near to the forest in the back of her house. After the sun shone, she woke up and shocked. She spent the night under the tree.

          "Daddy...!," she cried loudly. She didn't know the way back to her house. Meanwhile, Mr.Lee sought his little daughter. He usually found his daughter around the house and take his daughter to the bed before she woke up. But he can't found her daughter. He realized, he let the door unlocked. He really regret that he was careless last night.

          Rom tried to find the way back, she walked and walked.. Finally she met a cat perched on the branch. The cat said, "Why did you cry?"

          Rin answered, "I can't find my daddy... Where is daddy..?"

          The cat jumped down, "Don't cry anymore.."

          Rin still crying, "I want my daddy back.. Can you help me? Take me home.."

          "Follow me," the cat whispered. The cat brought the little girl into the old pond. The border of the pond was covering by the plant and flower. The cat said, "Touch the water and imagine your house."

          Then the little girl do what the cat command her. Suddenly the shadow of Rin's house appears at the water of pond. Rin was shocked, the cat said, "This is magic pond. The shadow of your mind will show in the water if you touch the water."

          After that, the cat lead her back to her house, "That is my house!," the girl shouted, "Would you come to my house to get fish or milk? My dad will give that to you."

          "No thanks."

          "Why? Do you dislike that food? What kind of food do you like?"

          "No.. I will back to forest now. Take care, little girl.." the cat ran back faster, although Rin called him to back.

          Finally, Rin back to her house and told her experience to her beloved father. Mr.Lee hug his daughter warmly. He never be careless anymore and let her lovely daughter went away anymore.